Second Draft - Audience Feedback

This video was shown is a class of students, and were asked to give me feedback on my music video with what I have done so far. 
They enjoyed:

• the slow start, building up the bar scene.
• the ending - merging all of my clips together to make it seem he is disorientated and drunk. 
• the blur I added onto his POV shots - again making the artist seem drunk.

Improvements:

• More lip synching.
• Some small errors - my hand was in a clip.
• Fine tuning the video giving a more professional look.

Suggestions:

• My teacher suggested me maybe looking at some old silent movies, and maybe adding some freeze frames. I think I this would suit my music video well and would add humour to my video. 

Overall, my progression of editing seems to be progressing well. Also, when the last part of the filming is done, the editing shouldn't take to long. Therefore I would expect my video to be completed in the next week, maximum 2 weeks.