I have added more of the performance into my video from my last shoot, and added a darker and a slightly higher contrast effect to my video to enhance dark boozy atmosphere throughout the clip. Personally I believe the last shoot really helped make the video look more professional and complete. The lip-synching is good and it is more even comparing both the screen time of the narrative and performance. The fade transition between the photos and the narrative again helps it look more professional.
Overall I am happy with my music video and I think it does relate to the typical conventions of the genres it is set in. Furthermore the performance and narrative compliment each other making it entertaining throughout.